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Post  Duskfang Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:31 pm

It sounds great so far, Keep up the good work, although you probably don't need to hear this from me, since you should probably know it.
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Post  Paddie paw Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:39 pm

How do I put this without sounding to eager?...

Wooooo! Keep it up Sparrow!
xD
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Post  Blitz Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:46 am

Good work Sparrow! another awsome chaper!
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Post  Duskfang Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:42 am

Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)
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Post  Paddie paw Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:46 pm

Ooooh you have another eager one Sparrow, the pressure is on now xD
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Post  Sparrow Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:54 am

Duskfang wrote:Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)

No worries Duskfang I am/will not forget any one. I am just introducing you guys slowly into the story that's all.

Here's a hint about who the next chapter is focused on!


It will be mainly about Midnight's group. (Paddie, Sunclaw, Blitz and ofcourse Midnight) On what they do after they meet up with the others. (Sparrow, Ralf, Reika, and Shinhan)
Plus one or two more members are going to be introduced in the story! Wink
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Post  Duskfang Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:39 am

K, Cant wait for it.
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Post  Ralf Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:43 am

Cool the story is awesome so far cant wait to read more
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Post  Sakura Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:04 am

Swesome! Like I said, I can't wait xD
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Post  Breeze Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:30 pm

Good job! I can't wait for more.
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Post  Sparrow Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:34 pm

A mainly black wolf with silver on his tail walked threw the undergrowth of the forest. He looked back the wolf following him. "Will you hurry up already?"
A sandy white male wolf looked up at him. "Oh shush it Duskfang I'm coming!" The wolf trotted up to him.
"Good cuz you know your really slow Jikins.." Duskfang laughed but stopped suddenly when he heard noise nearby. "Sh.."
Jikins followed Duskfang as they walked closer to the noise. Jikins poked his head threw a bush and was astonished to find four wolves walking by. He took his head out and looked at Duskfang. "Look, we could just join them." He looked back at them for a second then at Duskfang. "They look decent.."

Sparrow lead them on threw the forest. They reached a small pond and decided to take a break. Sparrow laid down under a tree near the water's edge. Ralf got a drink then went off to take a look around the area.
When Ralf was out of sight Shinhan ran and jumped into the pond. Reika looked over at him. "Do you have any sense of self control?"
Shinhan looked up at her from the water. He tilted his head. "Well I might sometimes and might not other times.." He swam around for a bit but got out when he saw Ralf come back, leading two lone wolves towards them.
Sparrow got up and looked at Ralf. "Who are they?.."
Ralf growled then looked at them. "I found them spying on us.."

Duskfang looked at Ralf in shock. "We weren't spying! We just heard some noise and followed it. Nothing wrong in that!"
Ralf rolled his eyes then turned to Sparrow. "What should we do with them?"
Sparrow thought for a minute. "Well.." She said turning towards the two wolves. "What are you doing around here?"
Jikins and Duskfang exchanged glances then Jikins looked at Sparrow. "We're looking for a pack to settle with... and we saw you."
Shinhan tilted his head. "So you were spying.."
Duskfang shook his head then looked at Ralf and Sparrow. "Can we just join your pack?"

Sparrow thought for a few minutes. She sighed then slowly nodded. "Yes, yes you may." Sparrow looked around. "Well um.. lets move on." She lead the pack off.


((( Sorry I didn't talk about the other group but I couldn't think of what to do for this chapter... )))
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Post  Duskfang Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:36 pm

WOw, I'm actually serious for once.(nah I'mn usually serius with most people)
Nice job.
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Post  Breeze Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:37 pm

Nice chapter Sparrow.
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Post  Blitz Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:38 pm

Good job there sparrow! as always.
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Post  Paddie paw Sun Sep 13, 2009 4:23 am

...

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...

Wooooooo!!!!

need I say more? =)
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Post  Sakura Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:01 am

love it xD
lol when I read 'mainly' I misread it as 'manly' lol then i re-read it xD.


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Post  Ralf Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:59 am

awesome story Sparrow Very Happy
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Post  Shinhan Sun Nov 01, 2009 6:21 am

Really late... but nice job ^^
And that's right!! No self control!!
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Post  Sparrow Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:41 am

eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.
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Post  Shinhan Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:06 am

Ok cool

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Post  Blitz Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:10 pm

Sweetness Sparrow Sweetness!(sorta)
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Post  Paddie paw Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:51 am

Woo another story ^^
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Post  Sakura Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:13 am

Sparrow wrote:eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.

You havn't lost your place... At least I don't think so.
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Post  Duskfang Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:36 am

Nah, I don't think she has, and she COULD always check..
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Post  Domino Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:16 am

You never know guys. You just never know.
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