- Pack Story -
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-Pack Story-
It sounds great so far, Keep up the good work, although you probably don't need to hear this from me, since you should probably know it.
Duskfang- Pup
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How do I put this without sounding to eager?...
Wooooo! Keep it up Sparrow!
xD
Wooooo! Keep it up Sparrow!
xD
Paddie paw- Pup
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Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)
Duskfang- Pup
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Ooooh you have another eager one Sparrow, the pressure is on now xD
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Duskfang wrote:Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)
No worries Duskfang I am/will not forget any one. I am just introducing you guys slowly into the story that's all.
Here's a hint about who the next chapter is focused on!
It will be mainly about Midnight's group. (Paddie, Sunclaw, Blitz and ofcourse Midnight) On what they do after they meet up with the others. (Sparrow, Ralf, Reika, and Shinhan)
Plus one or two more members are going to be introduced in the story!
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K, Cant wait for it.
Duskfang- Pup
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Good job! I can't wait for more.
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A mainly black wolf with silver on his tail walked threw the undergrowth of the forest. He looked back the wolf following him. "Will you hurry up already?"
A sandy white male wolf looked up at him. "Oh shush it Duskfang I'm coming!" The wolf trotted up to him.
"Good cuz you know your really slow Jikins.." Duskfang laughed but stopped suddenly when he heard noise nearby. "Sh.."
Jikins followed Duskfang as they walked closer to the noise. Jikins poked his head threw a bush and was astonished to find four wolves walking by. He took his head out and looked at Duskfang. "Look, we could just join them." He looked back at them for a second then at Duskfang. "They look decent.."
Sparrow lead them on threw the forest. They reached a small pond and decided to take a break. Sparrow laid down under a tree near the water's edge. Ralf got a drink then went off to take a look around the area.
When Ralf was out of sight Shinhan ran and jumped into the pond. Reika looked over at him. "Do you have any sense of self control?"
Shinhan looked up at her from the water. He tilted his head. "Well I might sometimes and might not other times.." He swam around for a bit but got out when he saw Ralf come back, leading two lone wolves towards them.
Sparrow got up and looked at Ralf. "Who are they?.."
Ralf growled then looked at them. "I found them spying on us.."
Duskfang looked at Ralf in shock. "We weren't spying! We just heard some noise and followed it. Nothing wrong in that!"
Ralf rolled his eyes then turned to Sparrow. "What should we do with them?"
Sparrow thought for a minute. "Well.." She said turning towards the two wolves. "What are you doing around here?"
Jikins and Duskfang exchanged glances then Jikins looked at Sparrow. "We're looking for a pack to settle with... and we saw you."
Shinhan tilted his head. "So you were spying.."
Duskfang shook his head then looked at Ralf and Sparrow. "Can we just join your pack?"
Sparrow thought for a few minutes. She sighed then slowly nodded. "Yes, yes you may." Sparrow looked around. "Well um.. lets move on." She lead the pack off.
((( Sorry I didn't talk about the other group but I couldn't think of what to do for this chapter... )))
A sandy white male wolf looked up at him. "Oh shush it Duskfang I'm coming!" The wolf trotted up to him.
"Good cuz you know your really slow Jikins.." Duskfang laughed but stopped suddenly when he heard noise nearby. "Sh.."
Jikins followed Duskfang as they walked closer to the noise. Jikins poked his head threw a bush and was astonished to find four wolves walking by. He took his head out and looked at Duskfang. "Look, we could just join them." He looked back at them for a second then at Duskfang. "They look decent.."
Sparrow lead them on threw the forest. They reached a small pond and decided to take a break. Sparrow laid down under a tree near the water's edge. Ralf got a drink then went off to take a look around the area.
When Ralf was out of sight Shinhan ran and jumped into the pond. Reika looked over at him. "Do you have any sense of self control?"
Shinhan looked up at her from the water. He tilted his head. "Well I might sometimes and might not other times.." He swam around for a bit but got out when he saw Ralf come back, leading two lone wolves towards them.
Sparrow got up and looked at Ralf. "Who are they?.."
Ralf growled then looked at them. "I found them spying on us.."
Duskfang looked at Ralf in shock. "We weren't spying! We just heard some noise and followed it. Nothing wrong in that!"
Ralf rolled his eyes then turned to Sparrow. "What should we do with them?"
Sparrow thought for a minute. "Well.." She said turning towards the two wolves. "What are you doing around here?"
Jikins and Duskfang exchanged glances then Jikins looked at Sparrow. "We're looking for a pack to settle with... and we saw you."
Shinhan tilted his head. "So you were spying.."
Duskfang shook his head then looked at Ralf and Sparrow. "Can we just join your pack?"
Sparrow thought for a few minutes. She sighed then slowly nodded. "Yes, yes you may." Sparrow looked around. "Well um.. lets move on." She lead the pack off.
((( Sorry I didn't talk about the other group but I couldn't think of what to do for this chapter... )))
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WOw, I'm actually serious for once.(nah I'mn usually serius with most people)
Nice job.
Nice job.
Duskfang- Pup
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Nice chapter Sparrow.
Breeze- Pup
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Wooooooo!!!!
need I say more? =)
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Wooooooo!!!!
need I say more? =)
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love it xD
lol when I read 'mainly' I misread it as 'manly' lol then i re-read it xD.
lol when I read 'mainly' I misread it as 'manly' lol then i re-read it xD.
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Really late... but nice job ^^
And that's right!! No self control!!
-shoots random puppy with AK-47-
And that's right!! No self control!!
-shoots random puppy with AK-47-
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eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.
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Woo another story ^^
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Sparrow wrote:eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.
You havn't lost your place... At least I don't think so.
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Nah, I don't think she has, and she COULD always check..
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